"Haley was a tremendous help in editing and critiquing a three-page synopsis of my manuscript. Her editorial changes were extremely thorough. Her comments were insightful and helped me to think about my messaging. And she did all of this with a quick turnaround, as per my request. I highly recommend Haley's services." (Update: Amy Carroll is now represented by agent Bob DiForio of D4EO Literary Agency.)
"Haley’s critique of my synopsis and query letter was invaluable. The cost was very reasonable since she generously included two rounds of editing in the price. Her feedback provided a perfect balance of what worked and what needed work and I was very impressed with how quickly she got back to me. Best of all, my query and synopsis has resulted in three manuscript requests so far!" (Update: J Crocker is now represented by agent Clare Wallace of Darley Anderson Children's.)
"Haley is a fantastic editor. We worked together on my query letter, synopsis, and opening pages. Haley was incredibly thoughtful in her feedback, quick to respond to revisions, and supportive all throughout the editing process. I am so appreciative to her for how much clearer, exciting, and concise she made my pitch. I definitely recommend her to anyone who is looking to tighten up their novel submission package ahead of querying agents. I hope to work with her again soon!"
"Haley Sulich came to my aid when I was having some major problems with my agent query letter. In a series of exchanges she worked with me to get the letter into the right format, and then worked through the content. She helped me get to the core of my story, working with me to find the hook and really focus on the important aspects of the main plot line.
Haley is professional and responsive in her feedback. Well worth the investment at this critical stage of presenting my novel to prospective agents."
"Haley helped me whip my query into shape within days. She handles all communications promptly and professionally. Her critiques are extremely thorough, helpful, and fair. She addresses structure, diction, punctuation, and clarity. Changes are accompanied by clear explanations for why she made the changes she did. If you're looking for sound advice, expert help, and stellar attention to detail, your query will be in great hands with Haley and Write Plan."
"Writers are told repeatedly that query letters are so important and it becomes overwhelming, like you're trying to write the most important admission essay ever (seriously, undergrad and grad school personal essays were easy compared to this). I thought I was on the right track, but I got a few rejections and started feeling uncertain. Haley approached me on Twitter and I decided to accept her help. The prices are incredibly reasonable for the in-depth feedback she gives and the obvious amount of consideration that she puts into each draft. We did a few rounds of feedback and she helped turn my query into a much cleaner version of what it was. It's got a better, more compelling hook and she assisted in eliminating some things that really didn't fit. I'm much happier with the query letter now and I got a partial manuscript request after a few weeks of using it. I highly recommend using Haley's critique services."